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profe

I've broken down part one of 'Profe' and finished re reading I'm not happy with how little I've described their sorrounding I might go back and fix that, but I don't know if I should do it now or try to write the fallowing chp.

Here is how I broke down the first part of profe which

Part one

1. - We get to know Luciano and Uriel

- The introductions (chp1)
We meet Uriel where he tells us a bit about his background. Also we get the first glance at Luciano, he gives us no background but we get to know him.

- Teacher/Student (chp2, 3)
School day the first time they meet. Student and teacher already we know this will not be a normal student teacher interaction.

- Home life (chp4, 5)

Again pointing out their differences the way they related to those they love and how they deal and take homelife

- Dealing with Fears (chp6 )
Both main charaters are faced with their fears. Uriel fears failing, Luciano has ghosts hunting him. They both deal with the fears in very different ways. Uriel faces them and looks for comfort in his brother while Luciano hides from them behind physical pleasure.

- Detention (chp7, 8)
First time alone, first kiss. This highlights Uriels internal battle which I believe started form Chp 2 but finally blooms in chp 8. He has his duties to his family and also this feeling he can no longer ignore. With Luciano we see his denial; he is feeling more than he usually allows himself and also loosing control. Both characters are loosing control, they are both control freaks. They each deal with it in similar ways one being more destructive than the other. Towards the end of Uriels P.O.V we see that he is willing to explore more of the mystery Luciano poses for him. In chp8 in Lucianos P.O.V his destructive behavior is further exposed as well as his fear of the feeling growing in him

- Again home life (chp9, 10)
More home life and more getting to know the characters as separate being before they become a couple.

- The games begin (chp11, 12)
Uriel is dealing better with what he is feeling and perhaps even has begun to accept them. Where Luciano is the opposite, he accepts lust but nothing more and as his way he hides, finding hide out in a new student Carlos. He is still playing his game but gaining the upper hand.

- Letting the feeling go (chp13)
They relent their control, for a moment they let go of fears and let their feeling take over. Uriel has accepted his feelings, he isn’t sure what he is going to do but he knows he loves the kid. Luciano feels the love allows it to take control but the moment he has a chance to think, the moment the feeling becomes to intence he panics.

- Consequences (chp14, 15, 16, 17)
Uriel worries briefly of what he has done, but then his familys secrets and past come to knock on his door allowing him to momentarily forget about what happened. Adding later on to his guilt. Luciano runs to hide behind the only thing he know, knowing that he won’t be able to relieve himself in sex he chooses the second best drugs.

In a drug haze Luciano jumps out a window, he is convinced that he is flying, flying away from his problems, but instead he is falling into addiction. Uriel feels guilt, he know he has responsibilities to his family to his daughter and even to Luciano he feels he has failed them all. It is time to make a decision. To Luciano he is a teacher and he has failed to be one, he has also failed his family by not being there. The only solution he finds is to break ties with Luciano and re connect with his family.

We also see Lucianos ghosts lurk around.

- Everything heads down hill (chp18… till end part one)
Lucianos addiction grows. Uriel tries to safe his marriage and distances himself from his brother who is his “rock” and only person he ever truly trusted. Marsha’s secrets come out and Jason returns.
For a moment we ignore Luciano and concentrate on Carlos and Robbie.

End of school year comes and it is party time for Luciano. Robbie gets closer to one of their friends and Carlos finds himself in a not so healthy relationship.

Uriel has a long talk with Marsha coming to a decision that brings him to Phillips office for advice. Luciano and Uriel bump into each other at a party (bar, park, not decided where exactly yet but it will night time during the summer)

Now I know what happens next and pretty much how it will happen I just need to put it in motion.



Now I need a name for a white toy chihuahua its a girl :)