Te Recuerdo Hoy

Though I haven't been able to write much to my existing stories, I have been able to start and almost finish another one. I want to post it here because I'd like some feed back on it and fp.com is still down. This is a 3 part story and there is only one character having a conversation with himself. The character really doesn't have a defined sex thought I use he a lot since I just think it sounds better than she. But he is just used to generalize not because it is a he, but it doesn't mean it is a She either.

( Death Part 1 )
( Part 2 )
Each part is only about one page long and the third and last is about half way done.