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Dec. 13th, 2007

Frank MIC

Profe

It's been erase. I'd mentioned I would do it and I finally did.

I'm hoping to post the first chp again on the 30th, wishfull thinking wishes for the 24th.

We shall see what happens.
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Jul. 22nd, 2007

Frank MIC

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Profe has been updated!

Does anyone know of a good son for a Mother/Son dance? 

For a wedding were the mom is getting merried, sort of a reverse Bride/father of the Bride thing.
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Jul. 16th, 2007

d'oh

Profe Character Sheet 2/?

Marsha Fairton

No real meaning to names

 

Nick names: N/A

 

Andrea Diaz

No real meaning to names

 

Nick names: N/A

General

General

 

Age: 20

 

Birthdates: March 7, 1986

 

Zodiac sign: Pisces

 

Sexual Orientation: straight

 

Occupation: N/A

 

Education:  Some College

 

Language: English, French,

 

American

 

Divorced

 

 

Age: 15

 

Birthdates: July , 17, 1991

 

Zodiac sign: Cancer

 

Sexual Orientation: Straight

 

Occupation: Student

 

Education:  High school, sophomore

 

Language: English

 

Hispanic

 

Not Married

 

Family

Family

 

Parents: Divorced

Mother:  Sonya Fairton, 40

Father:  Ran off with secretary he is never mentioned

 

Siblings: Jack Fairton, 19

 

Other: Aunt, Ms. Fairton, 45; Uncle Jack Fairton, 50; Ex-husband, Uriel Wheaver,20; Daughter, Victoria M. Wheaver,1.

 

Friends: Jake Stonhart, 21

 

 

Parents: Together

Mother: Not mentioned

Father: Not mentioned

 

Siblings: N/A

 

Other: N/A

 

Friends: Luciano,16; Carlos, 16; Robert (Rob, Robbie), 16; Dave, 17;  Henry, 15; (has other friends but not mentioned in story)

 

Physical

Physical

 

Eyes: Blue

 

Hair: Blond, long curls

 

Skin: White, light tan

 

Height: 5’4”

 

Weight: 100lbs

 

Eyes: Dark Brown

 

Hair: Dark Brown, straight, long till waist

 

Skin: Pale

 

Height: 5’ 5”

 

Weight: 115lbs

 

Extra

Extra

 

Pets: None

 

Favorite Food: N/A

 

Favorite Alcoholic Drink: Apple Martini

 

Cigarettes: Doesn’t smoke

 

Drugs: Marihuana, when younger

 

Favorite Book: Devil Wears Prada

 

Music: Pop music

 

Pets: Black cat, named Lucky

 

Favorite Food: Cream of Broccoli

 

Favorite Alcoholic Drink: Not old enough to drink.

 

Cigarettes: Doesn’t smoke

 

Drugs: None

 

Favorite Book: Heart of Darkness

 

Music: Alternative, Rock

 

Jun. 5th, 2007

Frank MIC

Profe

The story I love to hate. It's got a life of it's own and it choses not end no matter how much I beg it too.

So I read it over from about chp 30,and decided it doesn't totally suck and could use a bit of a re write (when ever i finish it that is)

3605 words into Chp 37 "Therapy is Speedy's brand new drug" and I am just now finished with Lucianos POV. I still have to work on Uriels.

Now I need to know from anyone following the story or anyone willing to give an opinion. Should I just post Lucianos POV and then in a different chp Uriels? or continue witht he pattern making chp 37 one mega chp?

Also since this is such a long chp and a lot of things happen, I also want to know if anyone is willing to read what I have up to now and let me know how bad it sucks. I would really like for at least 2 other pairs of eyes to read it before I post it.So if you are interested please let me know.

Any way if chp 37 is posted with both POV that would leave us with 1 chp until the end of part 2.

YAY!!!!!
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Mar. 2nd, 2007

Frank MIC

I am making progress.

Chp 33 of profe finished and I will email it to my beta once I'm done reading it over.
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Mar. 1st, 2007

Frank MIC

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CHP 32 of 'Profe' finally sent to my Beta !!
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Jan. 29th, 2007

Frank MIC

"Profe" Character sheet. 1/?

Jan. 18th, 2007

Frank MIC

Updates

Chp 4 of Best friends has been beta. I will post it tomorrow and chp has been send to Meg.

"Profe" I still haven't re written anything that I said I was but chp eh..30? I believe or 29 is finished I emailed my beta and when ever if she ever gets back to me I will send it to her.

I'll give this one week. If she doesn't answer I'll try and find someone else who will do it.

Jan. 8th, 2007

Frank MIC

Fp.com give me my reviews!!! They are mine, mine!! You can't keep them hostage from me!!

I'm in pain so much pain.

James decided we are loosing weight this year. I lost tons of weight walking andres to school last year but regained it all with a vengance once I stopped. We have taken up walking around the golf course (4 miles, 8.8 km more or less). My legs burn, my ankles hurt *cries*

But I'm glad we are doing it. My legs have gotten fat and I have no boobs or butt so all I had going were the legs, I need to get them back lol.

Our goals are for him to go back to 200 ( what I met him at 5 years ago, he is 6'1") and me back to 145 pre preg weight, though then I was already heavy, but I was 17 and going back to 120 just seems imposible I'm sure my bones weight more know than they did at 16-15, also James saw a pic of me at 120 and said I looked anorexic sick, not the first time I've been told that.

Hmm I might post that pic one day...

About Profe



I'm re writting all I have for part two. I like the chps I like were it's going, but I don't like the tone of the story Luciano has lost a lot of what makes him Luciano. So I'm going back to present tense.

little sneak of what I have planned? )
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Dec. 19th, 2006

Frank MIC

Update

Are the alerts not working again?

A short story has been added to Abuse "Because, tomorrow I'm going to love you". I decided to make it a collection of shorts with Abuse as the theme.

Profe chp 28 has also been uploaded.

Dec. 15th, 2006

Frank MIC

clean start

finally updated!

and next 2 chps of profe were send to my beta so expect an update soon.
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Dec. 9th, 2006

Frank MIC

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I still don't feel like writting but I have a bit of a problem.

Part 3 of Profe will be in third person probably present tense. Part 2 I was writting in past tense but I'm not sure I like it, here is a little piece of the next chap.can you tell me which you like most?

Read more... )


Not the best of examples but I tried to find something that doesn't give much of the chp away.
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Nov. 25th, 2006

Frank MIC

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"profe" finally updated!
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Nov. 24th, 2006

Frank MIC

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Kay chp 25 of profe something big, big happens basicly second to last for first part and big turning point to everything.

I asked Venustas iaceo to beta read from me since I send it to my beta like two weeks ago and haven't heard from her. I have the beta version waiting to be update but FP.com doesn't let me.

I'm en putada at fp.com, I've been wanting to post this since I wrote it!!


(be warned a bit of a spoiler)

I mean Uriel finally cracks finally goes to hell with everything and Luciano actually goes looking for him!!! and and and... something happens!!!!!!! that I can't say.

so f.u fp.
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Nov. 13th, 2006

Frank MIC

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uuuuuuuuuu... Isabel Allende will be at the miami Book Fair... that is very exiting to me since she is my favorite writer. I was planing on going anyway since they are suppose to have speacial things for kids but now I want to go when ever she will be there, hear her talk maybe get a book signed. hehe.


also so I don't forget Part one of Profe is done!! I haven't started on Part two because I'm decding whether to continue with the POV or not for Part Three it will be very hard to continue with them since there will be a lot going on that Uriel and Luciano can't know about till it happens... I dono... I need to think this over but I've been thinking it for the longest and can't decide.

Chp24 updated today and chp25 and 26 emailed to my beta today.
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Oct. 30th, 2006

Magic Trick

Part one of Profe only 3 chps left.

I have each chapter planned out and I don't care if I stay till 5 am I will finish it today no matter what.

Also I emailed chp 23 to my beta yesterday.

Now I just need to find the right songs to listen to while I write. Any suggestions?
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Oct. 23rd, 2006

Frank MIC

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Profe and clean start where finally updated a few days ago, and I'm sending the next chp for 'Profe' to my beta right now.

I have to say end of Part One of Profe is only a few chps away. We are entering winter and Part one will end in the summer but we will skip a few months.

I'm wondering if anyone is receiving author alerts? I haven't received any and I know stories from authors in my alert list have been updated.
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Oct. 8th, 2006

Frank MIC

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After re reading the next chp for Profe which I thouhgt wasn't finished I decided that it was. I've emailed it to my new beta and if everything goes well should be posted by sunday.
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Sep. 29th, 2006

Frank MIC

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I've been calling Andres teacher all day and can't get through. For some reason the automated thing is not working and the school secretary keeps answering and telling me she can't transfer me because they are in class. I have the extension number which she asked me not to let the office know she gave me so if the women would stop answering and let the machine do it I could dial it and get through but noooo... when I want a machine I can't get one.

I needed to talk to her today to see if andres is doing better. The deal was if he did better today he'd open his package (my mom sends him a care pack once a month)if I can't talk with the teacher his dad said he's just have to wait till monday and I know he will be very upset about it.

If anyone is waiting on 'Profe' I think it might be another 15 days before an update. I just been writing something else and knitting think it needs more work and I can't seem to be able to write anything decent for Lucianos POV.

Next thursday I have a meeting with the stupid lawyer whose assistant has been lying to me. She said the papers had already been submitted but guess what they havent, I've been calling almost everyday asking her to fax me the receipt for them and nothing. Till finally she said she isn't sure he has submitted them yet. Just last week I asked "Are you sure he has submittend them?" 

her:"ummm... yes I know he did something"

me: The only something he could have done is submit them. I know the check was already cashed.

her: I haven't talked to him but I know the papers you are asking for are in his office unfortunately he is not here and I don't have access to them.

me: But he submitted them?

her: yeah...

me: Can you fax me the receipt?

her: Sure I'll do that.

I'm sick of this.
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Sep. 22nd, 2006

Frank MIC

A small Preview of 'Profe' next chp

Uriels POV )
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